Matt Bellamy

Apart from changing "instore" to "in store", I can't find anything wrong with this. It's adorable! It flows well, the rhyming is good and it ends beautifully. Every line is ...

Hello! I really like this poem. Your rhyming scheme is different and interesting, and I think that's what I like most about it. It's also a bit creepy, especially the ...

I like the changes you have made! The bird simile makes a lot more sense now. Your poem is a little simpler, I think, but it still creates a strong ...

Hello! I think your poem is well-written. I assume it's all one poem, as it wouldn't have the same effect if they were seperated. Your rhyming is good and it ...

Hello! Not only was this quite long, but the lines themselves were pretty long, too. Someone once said that if a poem only has three good lines, it should only ...

Hello! The first thing that springs to my mind when reading this is that you're relying a lot on the font and colour of your poem, perhaps more than you ...

Milton Keynes is closest for me, too. I feel semi-famous.

Haha, wow! We're all really weird. :lol:

Hooray! Never heard of Edgbaston though.

Hello! This is pretty good. It's difficult for me to relate to, not being a Christian, but I like you metaphor - I'm a sucker for a good extended metaphor ...

Hello! I really, really like this. Your imagery is great and it just sounds wonderful, too. I've read a lot of rhyming poetry lately, which is okay, but it makes ...

Hello! I really like this. :) I like your simile here: "I'll climb its gnarled branches,/to its highest peak/like a bird gazing over the world" but I think the way ...

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Hello! I quite enjoyed this. The topic is pretty overdone but you did put an interesting spin on it with the weather metaphor. What I really enjoyed about your poem ...

I really like this. It flows well, but what I really like is the ending - it really made me think. Very interesting. Your rhyming is good but at times ...